B is for Boskydell
Ode to Rose (Shy) of Boskydell
Farmer, preacher, poet shorn
Take your place in fields of corn--
I see you now as you were then,
Over-alled lady with a ballpoint pen
Your name was Rose and aptly so
My conscience was pricked; God's Spirit said "Go!"--
Your tractor broke down on planting day--
I offered to help and you said okay
We walked the fields with seeds in hand--
Those beans did grow and fill the land--
I hear you now as I heard you then,
Over-alled lady with a poet's yen
"Write!" you said "and write some more"
"Don't wait too long or they'll close the door"
But I'm only 15--there's plenty of time
To write some prose and make some rhyme
Thirty-five years have come and gone--
Learning was piecemeal; degree's now done
But what do I know? What I learned from you then,
Over-alled lady with a smile and a pen:
Valleys are carved from trickling streams,
From torrents, from downpours that level our dreams--
And carve them deep into dells so dark
The pen lies still, the outlook stark--
The words you write will mean the most
If they come from bosky--not fields, no boast--
Bosky? Yes. A place, not describing, a Green-Knight glen,
A "bliss by turns with blunder" sojourn with pen--
Stay not here and stay not there,
Your head's not yours when your lot's too fair--
Put the bosky in the dell, shady, carved-out fen
Beside a hill of roses--over-alled lady shares her pen.
See A to Z Blogging Challenge for links to more "B's" from Challenge sponsors and other writers.
This is beautiful, I love especially--"Beside a hill of roses--over-alled lady shares her pen."
ReplyDeleteHi W2W .. love the word .. Bosky .. woody glades .. great fun - thank you .. Hilary
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure I catch all the allusions here, W2W, but your poem certainly made me think! A shady fen sounds like the perfect place for inspiration.
ReplyDeleteYou should win the award for the most unique B day word! Nicely written.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful poem - loved the word 'Boskydell'! Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteThanks, everyone, for your kind words. It's a good thing we get a break on Sundays from the challenge, but that doesn't mean I get a break from visiting everyone. See ya'll soon!
ReplyDeleteIt's fun to see you in the A-Z challenge Andrea...I'm also participating. Will look forward to reading your beautiful poetry.
ReplyDeleteI'm not crazy...I read another poetry blog called Arise to Write and for some reason thought that's where I was. Okay-maybe I am crazy. But your poetry is still lovely!
ReplyDeleteVery nice! I'm just stopping in to say 'hi' as I am getting to know my fellow A-Z bloggers!
ReplyDeleteI like this! I'll be back...
ReplyDeleteV\Jan Morrison
beautiful poem
ReplyDeleteA beautiful poem and a lovely photo of the boskydell. I found you via the 'surprise me' button, and I'm so pleased AND I remembered to click 'follow' before I click onwards!
ReplyDeleteSue@JumpingAground
This looks like where we live and sounds similar in lots of ways. Time for planting and our tractor can be a bit fickle at times. Lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteThis looks like where we live and sounds similar in lots of ways. Time for planting and our tractor can be a bit fickle at times. Lovely poem.
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